Nov 5, 2016 · A true beauty this poem is! I like the subtle rhyme between "thousand" and "surrounded" in the first 4 lines, that do not have rhyming ends. When rhymes arrive a little …

I Didn't Think those words those awful, spiteful words which twisted heart and quickened pulse, shone spotlight full on basest, bitter temper flared would that

Thanks for the encouraging words and reminiscing! &#X1F60E 1 Johntee Master of the Forum Join Date:Jun 2017 Posts:1771 Share Tweet #3 01-03-2024, 09:57 AM Poetry :- A wasting …

Since then, several Zoners have been having a great old time turning out witty, usually rhyming pieces in this form. This poem is not a quadrisept, just sticks to four-syllable lines. It is actually …

negligence a couple hundred years ago, killing one was abnormality. now, people are attacking, starting wars without mutuality. innocent children are dying,

Nov 20, 2016 · You paint a detailed picture here, spiteful and gloomy, in a very compelling form, showing of great rhyming skills bouncing up and down the rythmic flow of a ranting old man...

The love and pain of loss is reflected in your words. Loss of any kind is deeply painful just as any kind of abuse is painful even neglect -- It cannot be judged or criticized although well-meaning …

Posts Latest Activity Photos Search Page of 1 Filter Time Show Filtered by: new posts rhymarhyma Senior Member Join Date:Jan 2015 Posts:430 Share Tweet #1 Two sides of I'm …

Flowery words are fine, they help complete a rhyme. Yet as for me and who might agree. Give substance every time. Piper these are wonderful. pipersfancy Senior Member Join Date:Jan …

The good old days 03-16-2016, 07:28 AM How many times, heard someone say I want to go back to the good old days Yet how far back would they choose What new contraption chose to lose …